Hi man, Loving the intro atmosphere, kick and snare sound nice. Could use some more hats and crashes in the background (just a thought). The bass needs more work, try experimenting with phasers/vocoders/filters/distortion a little more. It sounds like you know what your doing just spend some more time on those all important bass sounds :)
Cool track anyway man. 4/5
I felt that hats would ruin the slow nature that this song has, and more crashes would put the energy level of this track farther than I wanted. They're good suggestions but they were intentionally left out :P
As for the bassline, I see what you mean. I did try to work with it a ton but I still managed to make it extremely repetitive and boring.
Thanks for the review and criticism, it really means a lot :D
production sounds tight as fuck man.
cool sound guys!
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